Wow, two in a row. That never happens!
Anyway, these are just a few boards I did for work. They are only 4 panels out of abour 16 or so pages. I say "or so" because this episode is mixed animation with live action footage, and I only needed to board the animation stuff. So there's a ton of blank panels scattered throughout the boards. Well that's enough of that.
This is just a simple back and forth dialogue sequence between two characters. I hope their expressions say it all, so... Leave me some feedback! See ya!
2 comments:
nicey...couple minor suggestions you can take or flush...
1. panel 2...lift him up into frame a bit more so his mouth doesn't get cut off...
2. panel 3...it feels like the guy on the left needs a bit more room to act so pull the fg character to the right a bit and make the left guy a bit smaller...it feels crowded but positions of characters is nice
love
Joe
Thanks for the suggestions! You are absolutely right.
I initially, I cropped the short dude because he is short, but maybe it doesn't work. Oh well.
Thanks again!
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